with these guidelines...
Name:
Species:
Personality:
Backstory:
Now, lets get started with the first character, Peridot by XxMadiRosexX.
Her bio is this and I've got to say, it's really original.
"Name: Peridot
Species: Hedgehog
Personality - Hardcore Dare Devil; Enthusiastic; Outgoing; Thrill-Seeker; Energetic; Hot-Tempered; Lazy; Brave; Courageous; Funny; Serious; Protective; Scary; Forgetful."
But what about her backstory? It was revealed in Madi Origins, her's the comic.
There, that's Peridot. I Over all, great!
10/10
Next up, Winter the hedge-cat by Katie B.
Okay, okay, please don't hate me for this... I don't like Winter. *gasp* Let me explain. I'm a fan of tragic characters like Peridot and Winter isn't that at all. I'm not saying happy characters can't be good, but Winter has nothing that makes a good character... except one tiny, wasted trait, Anti Winter. I'm a sucker for evil-twins/split personality so when I saw her I was like "Oh look, she looks well-
designed and interesting, what's her backstory and reasons she exist." Then I looked down and saw there were none. Here, let me give you the "bio" that is currently on her page...
"Name: Winter The Hedgecat
![blue Rose in teardrop crystal vase by RedX-MarksTheSpot](http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2014/122/7/6/blue_rose_in_teardrop_crystal_vase_by_redx_marksthespot-d7gtupz.gif)
Species: Hedgecat
![pink Rose in teardrop crystal vase by RedX-MarksTheSpot](http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2014/141/b/3/pink_rose_in_teardrop_crystal_vase_by_redx_marksthespot-d7gtuva.gif)
Age: 16
![aqua blue Rose in teardrop crystal vase by RedX-MarksTheSpot](http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2014/122/d/6/aqua_blue_rose_in_teardrop_crystal_vase_by_redx_marksthespot-d7gtukx.gif)
Gender: Female
![Heart - Free by Kawiku](http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2014/023/1/4/heart___free_by_kawiku-d73e9t8.gif)
Alignment: Good
![:iconmnrthumbsupplz: by mnrART](http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/278/0/7/_iconmnrthumbsupplz__by_mnrart-d5gwi99.png)
![:iconjakewiggleplz: by mnrART](http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/246/c/d/_iconjakewiggleplz__by_mnrart-d4j4txv.gif)
![:iconjakewiggleplz: by mnrART](http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/246/c/d/_iconjakewiggleplz__by_mnrart-d4j4txv.gif)
![:iconjakewiggleplz: by mnrART](http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/246/c/d/_iconjakewiggleplz__by_mnrart-d4j4txv.gif)
![:iconjakewiggleplz: by mnrART](http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/246/c/d/_iconjakewiggleplz__by_mnrart-d4j4txv.gif)
![:iconjakewiggleplz: by mnrART](http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/246/c/d/_iconjakewiggleplz__by_mnrart-d4j4txv.gif)
![:iconjakewiggleplz: by mnrART](http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/246/c/d/_iconjakewiggleplz__by_mnrart-d4j4txv.gif)
![:iconjakewiggleplz: by mnrART](http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/246/c/d/_iconjakewiggleplz__by_mnrart-d4j4txv.gif)
![:iconjakewiggleplz: by mnrART](http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/246/c/d/_iconjakewiggleplz__by_mnrart-d4j4txv.gif)
![blooming emote pink (CP) by TanteTabata](http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2013/305/1/d/blooming_emote_pink__cp__by_tantetabata-d6slnak.png)
Dislikes: Mephiles the Dark, Dr.Eggman, Anti Winter, Chocolate, Heights, seeing people sad.
Power: Supersonic Speed, Combo tricks, Psychokinesis, Fire, Hold Smash
![blooming emote, red (CP) by TanteTabata](http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/306/d/8/blooming_emote__red__cp__by_tantetabata-d6sq1qm.png)
with all the emotes. Do you see what it's missing, that's right, a backstory or personality. She has no flaws and she's just bland and uninteresting, but since I'm feeling nice, 3/10
3/10
-Majoragirl
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