with these guidelines...
Name:
Species:
Personality:
Backstory:
Now, lets get started with the first character, Peridot by XxMadiRosexX.
Her bio is this and I've got to say, it's really original.
"Name: Peridot
Species: Hedgehog
Personality - Hardcore Dare Devil; Enthusiastic; Outgoing; Thrill-Seeker; Energetic; Hot-Tempered; Lazy; Brave; Courageous; Funny; Serious; Protective; Scary; Forgetful."
But what about her backstory? It was revealed in Madi Origins, her's the comic.
There, that's Peridot. I Over all, great!
10/10
Next up, Winter the hedge-cat by Katie B.
Okay, okay, please don't hate me for this... I don't like Winter. *gasp* Let me explain. I'm a fan of tragic characters like Peridot and Winter isn't that at all. I'm not saying happy characters can't be good, but Winter has nothing that makes a good character... except one tiny, wasted trait, Anti Winter. I'm a sucker for evil-twins/split personality so when I saw her I was like "Oh look, she looks well-
designed and interesting, what's her backstory and reasons she exist." Then I looked down and saw there were none. Here, let me give you the "bio" that is currently on her page...
"Name: Winter The Hedgecat

Species: Hedgecat

Age: 16

Gender: Female

Alignment: Good
Likes: Zade the hedgehog, Nick the Hedgehog,Madi Rose, Blaze the cat,
Silver the hedgehog, (and more peeps) Pizza, Ice cream, Vanilla,
Spahgetti, (and more food xP), Helping those who cannot stand up for
themselves,Having friends, Doing things herself.Dislikes: Mephiles the Dark, Dr.Eggman, Anti Winter, Chocolate, Heights, seeing people sad.
Power: Supersonic Speed, Combo tricks, Psychokinesis, Fire, Hold Smash
"with all the emotes. Do you see what it's missing, that's right, a backstory or personality. She has no flaws and she's just bland and uninteresting, but since I'm feeling nice, 3/10
3/10
-Majoragirl






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